Storyboard - Draft 2

After recieving feedback from out first storyboard draft we learned our main problem was that we needed more cut a way shots. We learned that this was especially the case with Alfie's character in Scene 1. More shots of Alfie pouring petrol would be neccessary and then switching inbetween shots of Marie And Johnny getting closer to the action.
Therefore only two more storyboard sheets needed to be added before we had our final draft. In my opinion however, I thought Scene 3 & 4 needed to have more shots, as these were flashbacks. The intention was to show the flashback represented a time period of the past, to show the relationship between the characters had existed for a while. However, this was dependant on the different settings available to us within our constraints!

Storyboard

Photo Storyboard.

As we had many problems with our cast just days before our filming was due to start, for example actors dropping out and our main character falling ill, we had to use substitute characters to fill in for our actors. Also, as we had problems finalising our storyboard, as we kept changing shot orders etc, this photo storyboard only roughly follows the shot order which was captured in our film.