Storyboard - Draft 2

After recieving feedback from out first storyboard draft we learned our main problem was that we needed more cut a way shots. We learned that this was especially the case with Alfie's character in Scene 1. More shots of Alfie pouring petrol would be neccessary and then switching inbetween shots of Marie And Johnny getting closer to the action.
Therefore only two more storyboard sheets needed to be added before we had our final draft. In my opinion however, I thought Scene 3 & 4 needed to have more shots, as these were flashbacks. The intention was to show the flashback represented a time period of the past, to show the relationship between the characters had existed for a while. However, this was dependant on the different settings available to us within our constraints!