Monday 21 September 2009

Second Pitch Idea.

Our story starts when, one night after school Marie and Johnny, two school friends who have always had eyes for each other, slip away to the science labs and have started to get a bit too close. However, Marie starts to worry thinking her high-school boyfriend Alfie will find out. She tells Johnny how her relationship is not how she wants to be and is ruined with his jealousy. This conversation will be kept simple, but she will confide in Johnny how it affects her. She knows he will go insane so she suggests to Johnny they make a move. As they retreat Johnny finds they have been locked in. Marie thinks he is messing with her until he starts to panic and shakes the door. Suddenly the lights black out, the trays of the lab start shaking, and the taps slowly begin to drip. The couple start to be become more and more curious as Johnny swears he hears footsteps. It’s then when Marie finds something as she walks into the cupboard. An open box of matches and can of petrol are lying across the floor. She begins to freak until Johnny reassures her they are in a science lab, and it is probably the part of some experiment. The story then skips to the next morning where newspaper headlines are flashing. A voice over will then play to tell that two school children were killed last night in the suspicions of a non-accidental fire whilst a very mournful looking Alfie is sitting in the playground holding a picture. The camera will zoom into his eyes and then a flashback scene will start. Different clips of Marie and Johnny innocently spending time with each other, for example walking to class, will show and then cut to Alfie looking on, with his angry and frustrated emotions clearly on show. The flashback will then show Alfie and Marie walking along together, bickering that Alfie doesn’t want Marie to go out partying the weekend especially because he can’t go, when Marie’s phones rings. She talks on the phone laughing and giggling and then hangs up. Alfie asks who that was and she says one of the girls. She passes Alfie her bag to hold while she runs back to get something that she’s left behind in class. Alfie waits and once Marie’s out of sight he looks down her phone, to see her last received call was Johnny. The story then jumps forward to the present where Alfie is still sitting holding the picture.

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